Hey…. Thank you again for completing my paper. My instructor has come back with remarks about things I need to fix and was hoping since you wrote my paper, you could fix the issues for me. I need a shortened introduction and conclusion. Paragraph citations were missing. Also the paper is missing subtitles throughout. My teacher informed me that I need 3 more references (6 total). I know its a lot but she really loved the paper. Hopefully you still have all the information about my paper. She is big on citing everything!!



