Need help with my English question – I’m studying for my class.
College Admission Essay
Essay is to be a striking and driven piece of work, composed in 500 words, illustrating a powerful motivation towards school & hard work, being a role model for a younger sibling, dealing with a death in the family (grandfather), having a positive outlook for the future at (Penn State University) and to major in Cyber Security and minor in Music Technology.
please mention that i have a parent that was served in the military and is now a police officer. Being from London, living in Germany, California, Texas, Colorado, and Virginia. And taking a gap year after high school graduation to go to college in London for a year.
I also take part in music production in my spare time and work part time at Lowes.



